English 111 Lectures and More

As you read in your Achievement Requirements and as we talked about throughout the semester, ENG 111 is a portfolio class.

This means that all the writing you’ve done this semester is collected into one document that will serve as your portfolio. It will showcase your writing over the course of the semester to demonstrate how you have improved as writer and critical thinker.

Before reading this lecture, you should have watched the GSW Portfolio Video that fully explains the portfolio process. After watching it you can see that our ONLINE portfolio submission is going to be much different.

Under the Portfolio Button on the sidebar of our Blackboard site, you will find some important portfolio documents under the link “Important Portfolio Documents.”

Portfolio Assessment: First Evaluator is the form the portfolio reader will fill out responding to your portfolio and the grade he/she sees it deserves. As your instructor, I am the one responsible for informing you that fulfill the criteria for going to portfolio and what your grade in the class is thus far. Think of the portfolio reader as quality control. If you’ve passed 2 or more essays, fulfilled the other criteria for passing this class, and have gotten word from me that you are going to portfolio and are ready for ENG 112, then you should not worry about the portfolio process. 9.5 times out of 10 the portfolio reader agrees with the instructor’s assessment. What you need to know, though, is that I will fill out the heading on this form. You don’t need to worry about it.

Portfolio Assessment: Instructor is the form that I will use to make my comment on your portfolio. Think of it as my argument for why your portfolio should pass and how you are ready for the challenge of ENG 112. Again, I’m responsible for filling out this form; you don’t need to worry about it.

Copy Permission for Student Portfolio is the form I must collect in order to be able to use your essays as samples in my future classes. Also, the department may choose to use your portfolio or essays to help train future instructors. You are NOT required by any means to fill out this permission slip. However, it would be very beneificial to myself and my department if you chose to do so. If you have already given me permission to use your essay in class or if I have asked you for a copy of your essay, you will need to fill out this slip.

Student’s Narrative Self Reflection Form is the one form you MUST fill out. The narrative is the last piece of writing you will do in ENG 111, and it’s a important piece of writing. It tells the portfolio reader what you learned and allows you round out your entire portfolio with some final thoughts about your essays and your writing process. The Narrative is due Wednesday of Week 16 by 11:59 p.m. Remember, without a Narrative, I cannot submit your portfolio. And if I don’t submit your portfolio, that means you will NOT pass the class and you must take it again.

There is a Sample Narrative for you to read and follow its layout. Usually Narratives are one page, single-spaced documents that answer the questions proved on the Narrative Self Reflection Form in short answer or essay form. The choice is up to you as a writer. It’s important that you complete this assignment; that’s what matters. I’m not commenting on these; I’m just collecting them for your portfolios. Therefore, you MUST be sure to proofread, edit, and revise your Narratives on your own–good practice for future writing, right?

By the Friday of the last day of the last week of the semester, I will upload your portfolios into the Digital Drop Box. The portfolio reader will access them from there.

Throughout this semester I have created and maintained an electronic folder for each of you. In that folder are all five essays including the rubric with the grade, the Student Process Analysis, the assignment sheet, the final draft, the rough with my comments, and the Values Exploration Sheet. I will add the necessary forms to each student’s folder, so that everything is in place for portfolio.

Once I get the portfolio reader’s comments I will let you know via email and Facebook, and I will email you your portfolio and make your portfolio available the Digital Dropbox.

Also, at that time I will post necessary information regarding grade appeals, but that information can also be found in your Achievement Requirements that you read at the beginning of the semester.

Please don’t hesitate to ask me any questions! I’m here to help you complete this last part of the semester.

It’s been a joy to have you all in our ONLINE class!

Best wishes for a great portfolio and finals week!

Now that you have turned in your rough drafts of Essay 1 and I’ve read through each sections, here is a list of pointers for REVISION.

1.) Every essay (rough AND final drafts) should have a proper MLA heading.  A proper MLA heading begins on the left margin at the top of every paper, and it will have these elements in this particular order:

Your Name

Instructor’s Name (Amanda McGuire Rzicznek)

The Course (ENG 111)

The Date (9 September, 2007)

Headings are double-spaced, which is a blessing for those of you who worry about page length. 
2.) You MUST number each page in proper MLA format, which means you will have your last name and the page number in the top right hand corner on every page.

3.) For Essay 1 you are NOT proposing a solution.  Rewrite thesis statements that propose a solution by replacing “should” with “is” or “is not.” Also, you simply may choose to write “I agree with ______ policy” or “I disagree with _________ policy.”  No matter how you choose to rewrite your thesis you should NOT propose a solution in this essay; your job ONLY is to argue a position.

4.) Don’t use “you.” When a student writes “you” into an essay, that means he/she does not fully understand audience.  When one writes “you,” without having a sense of audience, most times “you” becomes the reader.  In this case, “you” equals me, your instructor, and I cannot relate to the positions arguing about on-campus policies.  Replace “you” with who exactly who mean.

5.) PROOFREAD!!!  I can’t say this enough.  My favorite example of not proofreading this time around: “This policy does not protect students from the dangerous treats of pedators.”  Show me some dangerous treats! I’m thinking Brownies, Cake, Lemon Bars, etc. And what are pedators? Proofreading is essential for making sure you use the right words to accurately convey your ideas.

6.)  Make sure all of your points are developed LOGICALLY.  Readers do NOT live inside your head.  They canNOT follow your logic.  It’s up to you to explain exactly what you mean, so your essay is Reader-based, not Writer-based.  Use topic sentences to state the paragraph’s main idea.  Then take a few sentences to explain that idea.  If you want to, pretend you are explaining your ideas to an alien for some other planet! Because you basically are explaining your ideas to aliens–those who can’t read your mind and comprehend what your are thinking.  SPELL it out.  You’re not treating your reader like he/she is stupid; you’re actually helping your reader see the world from your perspective.

7.) Connect every main idea that serves as a reason for your position to your thesis.  Don’t just assume that your personal example ties your point back to the thesis.  Actually, come out and state how the example relates to the thesis–essentially, your position.  Again, your reader is not a mind-reader.

8.) Spend more time on your Values Exploration Sheet BEFORE you write your rough draft.  The VES can help you focus and organize your thoughts.  Those who spend more time on their VESs by writing answers in complete sentences and answering questions in several sentences 9 times out of 10 had a stronger rough draft than those who gave one or two word answers.  And having a strong rough draft means less work for you before turning the final as well as raises your chances of Passing on the essay.

I hope you take all of these revision tips seriously and let them help you revise and craft a Passing essay.

Good luck and Happy Writing!

I saw this article on OpenCulture, and thought many of you would be interested in listening to the Grammar-focused podcasts they mention.

Enjoy!

Hi, all,

Welcome to BGSU! (Or welcome back to BGSU!)

This blog contains lectures for each of the essay cycles. Feel free to have a listen and see what will be expected of you as writer this semester. I suggest starting with Essay 1, where we will begin the first week of classes.

Also, on this blog, I will post class announcements, writing tips, and other information that may be helpful to you as a writer, BGSU student, and community member.

For instance, I just want to take a moment and share with you a few of my favorite things about Bowling Green.

Restaurants: I’ve heard many students say they need a break from res. hall food. Here are a few of my favorite local places (most of which are within walking or biking distance):

Easy Street Cafe: A great place to take your parents!

Naslada Bistro (Downtown BG): Tasty soups and other homemade treats! A great place for Sunday breakfasts or a hearty weekday meal.

Kermit’s (Downtown BG): Don’t overlook this great local diner! It’s perfect for breakfast and lunch!

Call of the Canyon (Downtown BG): Fantastic sandwiches. Cash only, though.

Trotter’s Tavern (Downtown BG): They are a little pricey, but they have the BEST steaks in town.

El Zarape: The BEST Mexican food in town, especially if you want a “sit down meal,” not a “take out” one.

The Cookie Jar: If you have a sweet tooth like me, you’ll love this place. They even deliver and are open late on weekends.

South Side 6: If you’re a Gyro fan, this place is a MUST. Their hummus is to die for!

Qdoba: The best burritos in town. Way better than Chipolte, in my humble opinion.

Checkout Campusmenus for more info!

Pizza: Every college town has their local pizza joints. These two are my favs:

Myles: If you’re looking for extra ooey, gooey, and yummy. Pieces are usually an inch thick.

Pisanello’s: If you’re looking for a more traditional pizza.

Local Markets: Looking for a special salsa or organic fruit, look no further:

Stimmel’s: Hands-down they have the best lunchmeat in town as well as doughnuts and specialty items.

Squeaker’s: Vegetarian or Vegan, this local market has the goods you need or they can get them for you.

Salon: We all want to look our best, right? Gallery Salon & Spa has reasonable prices and really friendly stylists.

I’m a huge supporter of local businesses, which I’m sure you can tell by my list.

I hope this information helps you adjust to BGSU or helps you get reacquainted with the town.

And I look forward to meeting you all very soon!

AMR

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Links:

Wikipedia

Open Culture

Blogs In Education

Basic criteria for Blogs: utilize Web 2.0 technologies, have blogrolls, have specific agenda with posts that relate to that agenda, and are updated frequently.

As you search, you will find more criteria, which I expect you will share in our class wiki.

For more information on understanding what a blog is and how to properly cite a blog post, refer to pages 597 and 759 in your Simon and Schuster Handbook for Writers.

 

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Here are a few examples of proper citations. Note where the punctuation goes!

Author’s last name, first name. Book Title. City of Publication: Publisher, Year of Publication.

Author’s last name, first name. “Article Title.” Magazine Title. Date: pages it appears on.

Author’s last name, first name. “Article Title.” Academic Journal Title. Volume.Issue (Year): Page Numbers.

Author’s last name, first name. “Article Title.” Website date published. Date you accessed site.

For more information on the Works Cited page, refer to pages 572-598 in your Simon and Schuster Handbook for Writers.

Note: Titles can be underlined or italicized; just be sure to be consistent with either one you choose.

 

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Check out the Online Writing Lab (OWL) at Purdue University for additional MLA support!

And be sure to use our own BGSU Writing Center for help too!

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One example of MetaD would be: “Therefore, the Common Reading Experience Program is benefiting first year students and should remain in place.”

Of course, MetaD can be longer than a sentence.

Want a list of ideas for transitional expressions? Check out Summary Box 3.5 on page 94 112 in your Simon and Schuster Handbook for Writers.

For more information on MetaD and transitions, refer to pages 88-89, 94, and 112 in your Simon and Schuster Handbook for Writers.

 

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Begin CAs with key phrases like “Some _________ may argue…” The blank is where the opposition goes. For example, “Some skeptical professors may argue that the Common Reading Experience program is not beneficial. They may say…”

And always clarify you don’t mean “ALL” of the opposition. Only “SOME.”You don’t want to generalize the entire opposition because you may risk alienating your audience.

Begin Rs with key phrases like “However,” “But,” or “On the other hand.”

Rs can be in the same paragraph as the CA or a new paragraph all to itself. You have choices to make at the writer.

Want a challenge? How about starting your essay off with a counterargument and have each of your main points rebuttal the CA?

For more information on CAs and Rs, refer to pages 681-685 in The St. Martin’s Guide to Writing.

 

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